Hello Gage I like how you have laid out your tramp D.L.O, I also like how you added the success criteria for everybody to know what we had to do.
Try not to use (and) to start a sentence you could use a comer then and. I think your D.L.O was amazing because it made sense and I think it was at a year 8 level.
You could maybe next time make a D.L.O movies from the tramp. You should put you opinion on the tramp, how hard was it or how easy it was. But well done on you Lake Daniells tramp.
29/11/17
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Gage,
Hello Gage I like how you have laid out your tramp D.L.O, I also like how you added the success criteria for everybody to know what we had to do.
Try not to use (and) to start a sentence you could use a comer then and. I think your D.L.O was amazing because it made sense and I think it was at a year 8 level.
You could maybe next time make a D.L.O movies from the tramp. You should put you opinion on the tramp, how hard was it or how easy it was. But well done on you Lake Daniells tramp.