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Robotics with Ms Chowfin
Designing a Mars Lander For the start of our design we tested all of the three bots on the mars lander and disguised what one ...
Designing a Mars Lander For the start of our design we tested all of the three bots on the mars lander and disguised what one ...
Kia Ora Gage
ReplyDeleteYou and Ryan did a great job on your poem there was just a few things you missed. You did a great job including;
*The Maori name for the weta
*A description of location of the weta species we would find on the bush track
*A simile
*Sibilance
*A suffix
*A blend.
Congratulations on including these things however there was some things you missed.
You forgot to include;
*The scientific name for the weta
*The life cycle of a weta
*Information about the food web
*Homonyms
*Synonyms
*A plural
These were a few key things that would’ve improved the quality of your work, so next time you should double check against the criteria.
My favorite part of your poem was where you used a simile to describe what a weta leg looks like. Feel free to comment on my weta poem which is on my learning blog. Great job on including the things you did include.
Aleece
Karoro School
Hi Gage,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Oh Hsen and I am from Panmure Bridge School in Auckland. I really like your poem. I learnt a new fact from you. I learnt that the Tree weta lifts its legs up to look bigger to try and scare its predators.
Did you take the photo of the weta? You can attribute the image of the weta if it is from google. This is a way to show credit to the person who took the photo.
From Oh Hsen